Merge pull request #5905 from EnterpriseDB/release/2024-08-02a

Author: josh-heyer

product_docs/docs/epas/16/upgrading/minor_upgrade/05_performing_a_minor_version_update_of_an_rpm_installation.mdx

@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@ redirects:
 - /epas/latest/epas_upgrade_guide/05_performing_a_minor_version_update_of_an_rpm_installation/
 ---
 
-If you are upgrading a Red Hat Enterprise Linux-based system (or a compatible system such as Rocky Linux, Alma Linux, Oracle Linux), then you used an RPM package to install EDB Postgres Advanced Server. To perform a minor upgrade on these systems, use the `dnf` package manager.
+If you're upgrading a Red Hat Enterprise Linux-based system or a compatible system such as Rocky Linux, Alma Linux, Oracle Linux, then you used an RPM package to install EDB Postgres Advanced Server. To perform a minor upgrade on these systems, use the `dnf` package manager.
 
 !!! Note
-    This procedure only performs an upgrade between minor EPAS releases. To upgrade to a later major release, use the [`pg_upgrade` procedure](../major_upgrade/).
+    This procedure performs an upgrade only between minor EDB Postgres Advanced Server releases. To upgrade to a later major release, use the [`pg_upgrade` procedure](../major_upgrade/).
 
 1.  To list the package updates that are available for your system, open a command line, assume root privileges, and run:
 
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ If you are upgrading a Red Hat Enterprise Linux-based system (or a compatible sy
     dnf check-update edb*
     ```
 
-1.  After you identify the package(s), update them:
+1.  After you identify the packages, update them:
 
     ```shell
     dnf update <package_name>