Merge pull request #48 from RISC-OS-Community/develop

Improved video creation documentation

Author: pzaino

doc/RISCOSCodingHowToMakeVideos.md

@@ -27,17 +27,17 @@ Unless otherwise agreed with the RISC OS Community team, the following guideline
 Unless otherwise agreed with the RISC OS Community team, the following guidelines should be followed:
 
 * Videos should be related to RISC OS, either coding "on" or "for" RISC OS or using RISC OS. If you want some ideas to work on, please check the [Ideas and suggestions for mini courses](doc/RISCOSCodingVideosIdeas.md) document.
-* If you want to make a video about your own project, please contact the RISC OS Community team first. Also make sure your project is Open Source and, possibly, available (publicly) on GitHub. The reason to restrict videos to Open SOurce projects only is to avoid any potential legal issues (so it's not negotiable, sorry!).
-* Videos should be as short as possible. If you have a lot of content to show, please consider splitting it into multiple videos (check [Series](#series) for more details).
+* If you want to make a video about your own project, please contact the RISC OS Community team first. Also make sure your project is Open Source and, possibly, available (publicly) on GitHub. The reason to restrict videos to Open Source projects only is to avoid any potential legal issues (so it's not negotiable, sorry!).
+* Videos should be as short as possible (between 5 to 15 minutes max, and not shorter than 5 minutes). If you have a lot of content to show, please consider splitting it into multiple videos (check [Series](#series) for more details).
 * Videos should be as simple as possible. Please avoid using technical terms or jargon unless strictly necessary. If you have to use technical terms or jargon, please explain them in simple terms and/or provide links to publicly available resources (like Wikipedia for example) that explains such concepts in clear terms.
-* You should record just the screen of your computer. Please avoid recording yourself or other people. We do not assume any responsibility for any potential legal issues that may arise from recording people without their explicit consent and/or privacy breaching coming from showing people on cameras etc.
+* You should record just the screen of your computer. Please avoid recording yourself or other people. We do not assume any responsibility for any potential legal issues that may arise from recording people without their explicit consent and/or privacy breaching coming from showing people on camera etc.
 
 #### Video Content restrictions
 
 * Videos should be friendly and welcoming to everyone. Please avoid any kind of offensive language or behavior.
 * You should not record any copyrighted content. Our videos will always be freely available and provided under [YouTube CC license (Creative Common license)](https://support.google.com/youtube/answer/2797468?hl=en-GB).
-* Your videos should be as impartial as possible. Please avoid trying to promote any specific product or service. It's our strong believe that we should show only technical content and let the viewer decide what to use and what not to use. It's wonderful to be enthusiastic about a product or service, but please avoid trying to convince the viewer to use it. Also please avoid trying to convince the viewer to not use a specific product or service.
-* You should not record any content that may be considered potentially illegal, offensive or inappropriate. Please avoid showing any kind of offensive or inappropriate content on your screen as well. If you are not sure about what is considered offensive or inappropriate, please contact the RISC OS Community team. Also please consider reading our [Code of Conduct](CODE_OF_CONDUCT.md). Our videos are available world wide, so please make sure your content is suitable for everyone.
+* Your videos should be as impartial as possible. Please avoid trying to promote any specific product or service. It's our strong belief that we should show only technical content and let the viewer decide what to use and what not to use. It's wonderful to be enthusiastic about a product or service, but please avoid trying to convince the viewer to use it. Also please avoid trying to convince the viewer to not use a specific product or service.
+* You should not record any content that may be considered potentially illegal, offensive or inappropriate including in desktop background pictures or examples files and images etc. If you are not sure about what is considered offensive or inappropriate, please contact the RISC OS Community team. Also please consider reading our [Code of Conduct](CODE_OF_CONDUCT.md). Our videos are available world wide, so please make sure your content is suitable for everyone.
 * Please ensure that your video remains focused on the technical content and refrains from featuring any political, religious or offensive material. This includes any content that could be discriminatory or harmful to any age, gender, LGBT+ individuals and other minority groups or ethnicity. If you are unsure about what may be considered inappropriate, please consult the RISC OS Community team. Additionally, we strongly encourage you to familiarize yourself with our [Code of Conduct](CODE_OF_CONDUCT.md) for more detailed guidance.
 * Please understand that we will not publish any video containing material that doesn't meet the above guidelines and doesn't respect our [Code of Conduct](CODE_OF_CONDUCT.md).