v0.5

Author: RoxanneSHS

CorwinEET/Tra/english/corwinj.tra

@@ -19,22 +19,22 @@
 @18   = ~I'm not a child. I'm-one-two-three-four-five-five years old.~
 @19   = ~I stand corrected. ~
 @20   = ~Treasure your years, whatever their number, child - for they will pass quickly.~
-@21   = ~Just one. Feels like more than that sometimes.~
+@21   = ~Just one. Feels like more than that sometimes.~ [BD35436]
 @22   = ~I'm a handful. That's what Grandpa says, anyway. His hands aren't that big, though. I'd say I'm at least... six handfuls. Six of his hands, I mean.~
 @23   = ~I see...~
 @24   = ~You talk funny.~
 @25   = ~Sometimes.~
-@26   = ~<CHARNAME>, this is my daughter, Rohma. Rohma, this is <CHARNAME>.~
+@26   = ~<CHARNAME>, this is my daughter, Rohma. Rohma, this is <CHARNAME>.~ [BD35421]
 @27   = ~Will you help her defeat Sarevok and the iron bastards...?~
 @28   = ~Rohma! Not such words. And I told you not to talk to strangers about these things.~
 @29   = ~But <PRO_HESHE>'s no stranger, it's <CHARNAME>.~
 @30   = ~My daughter, I told you to be more careful with your words in front of the child. She is like you were, she understands too much for her age.~
 @31   = ~Will you kill Sarevok?~
 @32   = ~...I think your mother should probably answer that.~
 @33   = ~I'm hoping it won't come to that.~
-@34   = ~They'll do what they have to.~
+@34   = ~They'll do what they have to.~ [BD35426]
 @35   = ~Just like you?~
-@36   = ~Exactly like that.~
+@36   = ~Exactly like that.~ [BD35428]
 @37   = ~Now, you do what your grampa says while I'm gone, all right?~
 @38   = ~I will, Mama.~
 @39   = ~Take care, daughter, don't worry about us. We wanted go to the Hall of Wonders, Rohma. Forgot already?~
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
 @96   = ~Sounds like you grew up by becoming a mother.~
 @97   = ~It doesn't give me responsibility to listen to your laments, woman. It was your choice after all.~
 @98   = ~It's hard to imagine that officer Corwin was once a rascal of sorts.~
-@99   = ~It may not have been the best idea at the time to have a child with a father like...Fanari. But it has changed me and I'm happy it did.~
+@99   = ~It may not have been the best idea at the time to have a child with a father like...Famari. But it has changed me and I'm happy it did.~
 @100  = ~Anyway - thanks for listening. It's better to move on now. My considerations can wait another day. It's important that we get this job done. And done well.~
 @101  = ~(Corwin has grabbed your arm and causes you to stop and face her. She seems to be slightly agitated.)~
 @102  = ~Listen for a minute, <CHARNAME>, I need to tell you something about my past...it may become relevant pretty soon.~
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
 @129  = ~What would you like to know?~ [BD35075]
 @130  = ~How did you come to join the Flaming Fist?~
 @131  = ~What's your sense of this Angelo Dosan?~
-@132  = ~Where you're planning to sleep tonight.~
+@132  = ~Where you're planning to sleep tonight?~
 @133  = ~Sleeping isn't on my agenda. Once I'm finished with you, I'll be spending what time I've got left preparing for the upcoming events.~
 @134  = ~There's much to do before we leave. Tell me, what are your thoughts on Angelo Dosan?~
 @135  = ~You and the rest of the Flaming Fist. Tell me, how did you come to join Duke Eltan's ranks?~
@@ -184,10 +184,10 @@
 @183  = ~I just want to make sure *we* don't load more on our platters than we need. Let's do what must be done and don't strain Tymora too much.~
 @184  = ~(Sarcastic) With you at my side, oh hero, how could I feel afraid...~
 @185  = ~A charismatic but sleazy guy. I'm loyal to the Flaming Fist but I doubt that he is. He is supported by someone and rose pretty quick in the ranks. ~
-@186  = ~ Ah, the maggot, the scum bag - that's how the *great hero* ends, a bloody traitor.~
-@187  = ~ You must know him even better than I do, Shar-Teel.~
+@186  = ~Ah, the maggot, the scum bag - that's how the *great hero* ends, a bloody traitor.~
+@187  = ~You must know him even better than I do, Shar-Teel.~
 @188  = ~That scoundrel who copulated with that whore who called herself my mother...I have no evidence, I just know this fool too well. This Iron Throne complot is just the kind of thing he would fall for, the prospect of easy money and power and such - the whole package of pathetic male idiocy that attracts leeches like Angelo Dosan.~
-@189  = ~ You are his daughter? Poor girl, it explains quite a bit of how you became.~
+@189  = ~You are his daughter? Poor girl, it explains quite a bit of how you became.~
 @190  = ~You mistrust your own superiors, Captain?~
 @191  = ~Duke Eltan shares your view on this, Captain?~
 @192  = ~Hurbold Duethkatha, he did not know about this?~