editorial

Author: RoxanneSHS

CorwinEET/Dialogues/BenoBG1.d

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ DO~SetGlobal("EECorBeno","bg0224",4)~
 END
 ++~And you might be working for that organisation, I presume?~+ BG2
 ++~Corwin, I let you deal with him, you know him better, I suppose.~+ BG2
-++~Are you just another of those unlucky bounty hunters that cross my path? You see me still standing, they*re dead - care to join them?~+ BG2
+++~Are you just another of those unlucky bounty hunters that cross my path? You see me still standing, they're dead - care to join them?~+ BG2
 
 CHAIN
 IF~~THEN BDFamari BG2

CorwinEET/Dialogues/CorwinJ.d

@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ IF~~THEN BDCorwiJ Beno3
 ~Fine. Beno and I were... together. It was a long time ago, and it didn't end well, especially for him. I got Rohma, so I'm not complaining.~[BD52083]
 END
 ++~He fathered your daughter?~+ Beno5
-++~This Beno—I take it he hasn't been much involved in Rohma's life.~+ Beno5
+++~This Beno - I take it he hasn't been much involved in Rohma's life.~+ Beno5
 
 CHAIN
 IF~~THEN BDCorwiJ Beno4