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Author: gewarren

xml/ns-System.Data.Sql.xml

@@ -4,11 +4,7 @@
     <remarks>
       <format type="text/markdown"><![CDATA[
 
-## Remarks
- For information about the functionality that the classes within this namespace support, see [Enumerating Instances of SQL Server (ADO.NET)](/dotnet/framework/data/adonet/sql/enumerating-instances-of-sql-server) and [Query Notifications in SQL Server](/dotnet/framework/data/adonet/sql/query-notifications-in-sql-server).
-
-> [!NOTE]
->  In beta releases of ADO.NET version 2.0, the <xref:System.Data.Sql> namespace also contained classes for use with SQL Server common language runtime (CLR) integration. However, those classes have been moved into their own namespace, <xref:Microsoft.SqlServer.Server>. For more information about using SQL Server CLR integration, see [SQL Server Common Language Runtime Integration](/dotnet/framework/data/adonet/sql/sql-server-common-language-runtime-integration).
+For information about the functionality of the classes within this namespace, see [Enumerating Instances of SQL Server (ADO.NET)](/dotnet/framework/data/adonet/sql/enumerating-instances-of-sql-server) and [Query Notifications in SQL Server](/dotnet/framework/data/adonet/sql/query-notifications-in-sql-server).
 
  ]]></format>
     </remarks>

xml/ns-System.Drawing.Design.xml

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
  The classes in this namespace can be used to create custom toolbox items, type-specific value editors that can edit and graphically represent values of their supported types, and type converters that can convert values between certain types. This namespace provides the basic frameworks for developing extensions to the design-time UI.
 
 > [!CAUTION]
->  Classes within the <xref:System.Drawing.Design> namespace are not supported for use within a Windows or ASP.NET service. Attempting to use these classes from within one of these application types may produce unexpected problems, such as diminished service performance and run-time exceptions.
+> Classes within the <xref:System.Drawing.Design> namespace are not supported for use within a Windows or ASP.NET service. Attempting to use these classes from within one of these application types might produce unexpected problems, such as diminished service performance and run-time exceptions.
 
  ]]></format>
     </remarks>

xml/ns-System.Globalization.xml

@@ -9,7 +9,6 @@
 The following blogs include discussions of the <xref:System.Globalization> namespace and its classes:
 
 - <https://learn.microsoft.com/archive/blogs/shawnste/>
-
 - <https://learn.microsoft.com/archive/blogs/kierans/>
 
 Two of the .NET types in this namespace, <xref:System.Globalization.CultureAndRegionInfoBuilder> and <xref:System.Globalization.CultureAndRegionModifiers>, are found in an assembly named *sysglobl.dll*. To successfully compile code that uses these types, add a reference to sysglobl.dll.

xml/ns-System.Net.Http.xml

@@ -44,6 +44,5 @@ If your app uses the <xref:System.Net.Http> and <xref:System.Net.Http.Headers> n
  ]]></format>
     </remarks>
     <altmember cref="N:System.Net.Http.Headers" />
-    <related type="Article" href="https://learn.microsoft.com/previous-versions/windows/apps/hh761504(v=win.10)">Connecting to a web service</related>
   </Docs>
 </Namespace>

xml/ns-System.Runtime.Intrinsics.Arm.xml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <Namespace Name="System.Runtime.Intrinsics.Arm">
   <Docs>
-    <summary>Exposes select instruction-set extensions for ARM systems. These instruction sets are expressed as separate classes for each extension. Support for any extension within the current environment can be determined by querying the <see langword="IsSupported" /> property on the respective type.</summary>
+    <summary>Exposes select instruction-set extensions for ARM systems. These instruction sets are expressed as separate classes for each extension. You can determine support for any extension within the current environment by querying the <see langword="IsSupported" /> property on the respective type.</summary>
     <remarks>To be added.</remarks>
   </Docs>
 </Namespace>

xml/ns-System.Runtime.Loader.xml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <Namespace Name="System.Runtime.Loader">
   <Docs>
-    <summary>Provides interfaces and classes to allow developers the opportunity to influence runtime loading behavior.</summary>
+    <summary>Provides interfaces and classes to influence runtime loading behavior.</summary>
     <remarks>To be added.</remarks>
   </Docs>
 </Namespace>

xml/ns-System.Runtime.xml

@@ -1,11 +1,10 @@
 <Namespace Name="System.Runtime">
   <Docs>
-    <summary>Contains advanced types that support diverse namespaces such as the <see langword="System" />, <see langword="Runtime" />, and the <see langword="Security" /> namespaces.</summary>
+    <summary>Contains advanced types that support diverse namespaces such as the <see langword="System" />, <see langword="Runtime" />, and <see langword="Security" /> namespaces.</summary>
     <remarks>
       <format type="text/markdown"><![CDATA[
 
-## Remarks
- The types found in this namespace are intended for use in advanced development.
+The types found in this namespace are intended for use in advanced development.
 
  ]]></format>
     </remarks>