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Create "for journalists" page #58

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harrislapiroff opened this issue Nov 21, 2024 · 4 comments
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Create "for journalists" page #58

harrislapiroff opened this issue Nov 21, 2024 · 4 comments
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eloquence commented Jan 3, 2025

I've taken a swing at some copy for this page here (FPF-viewable for now) and would appreciate suggestions/comments before I turn it into a PR (it'll also need to pass through our internal editorial review process).

I've intentionally adopted copy similar to Superbloom's suggestions in the website redesign: short, straightforward sentences, interleaved with visuals; few technical terms (and links where they couldn't be avoided).

I extracted the "How Dangerzone works" illustration from Penpot, and copied the news headline screenshots from a prior team presentation. It would be great to have additional visuals even for this first pass, e.g., some of the illustrations Eriol came up with.

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almet commented Mar 10, 2025

@eloquence sorry for the delay here, it just felt off my radar. I've just added comments in the document!

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eloquence commented Mar 10, 2025

Thanks @almet. I've responded to your comments there. Let's see if we can resolve those tomorrow; if so, I think we could route it to FPF's editorial team next for a copyediting round before we turn it into a PR.

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It's now with the editorial desk (usually this results in a few copyedit suggestions, likely within the next week or so).

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