meta/style_guide: Copy-edit

Author: jpmckinney

docs/meta/style_guide.rst

@@ -32,10 +32,9 @@ Text formatting
 -  When referring to a **code** from a codelist, enclose the value in single quotes, e.g. "We have added a 'direct' code to the ``method`` codelist". Note that ``true`` and ``false`` are not codes; they are boolean values.
 -  When pluralizing a **field** or **subschema**, treat the field/subschema name as a proper noun, and add a ``'s`` instead of an ``s`` to the end, or treat it as a mass noun and add nothing to the end
 -  When referring to a field in JSON Schema, use dot notation, like ``tender.id``. (Slash notation is reserved for `JSON Pointer <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6901>`__. For example, the JSON Pointer for ``tender.id`` is ``/definitions/Tender/properties/id``.)
--  When referring to a field in OCDS data, use a JSON Pointer, like ``/tender/id``. Slash notation is preferred, but dot notation is allowed. Use whichever notation is consistent with the proximate documentation.
+-  When referring to a field in OCDS data, use a JSON Pointer, like ``/tender/id``. That said, dot notation is allowed for consistency with existing documentation.
 
-.. tip::
-  It is more common to refer to a field in OCDS data than a field in JSON Schema. For example, an instruction to populate a particular field is a reference to OCDS data. You can only populate OCDS data, you can't populate schema - the schema is unchanging for a given version.
+.. tip:: Examples and step-by-step mapping guidance typically refer to fields in OCDS data, not fields in JSON Schema. For example, instructions to populate fields refer to OCDS data. (You can't populate JSON Schema; the schema is unchanging, for a given version of OCDS.)
 
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