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Author: taylorotwell

requests.md

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ To get the full URL, not just the path info, you may use the `url` or `fullUrl`
     // With Query String...
     $url = $request->fullUrl();
 
-You may also get the full URL after appending query parameters, so if the request is targeted at `http://domain.com/foo`, the following method will return `http://domain.com/foo?bar=baz`:
+You may also get the full URL and append query parameters. For example, if the request is targeted at `http://domain.com/foo`, the following method will return `http://domain.com/foo?bar=baz`:
 
     $url = $request->fullUrlWithQuery(['bar' => 'baz']);