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# Release Notes

This is a Dasharo Pro Package Release. o obtain access to the pre-built binaries,
This is a Dasharo Pro Package Release. To obtain access to the pre-built binaries,
you need to [subscribe to the Dasharo Pro Package subscriber](https://docs.dasharo.com/ways-you-can-help-us/#become-a-dasharo-pro-package-subscriber).
You can do this by purchasing a Dasharo Pro Package product from our [shop](https://shop.3mdeb.com/shop/dasharo-pro-package/1-year-dasharo-entry-subscription-for-network-appliance-corebootseabios/).
As a subscriber, you will receive access to all firmware updates for the
duration of your subscription via the Dasharo Pro Package newsletter,
and gain entry to the Dasharo Premier Support invite-only live chat
on the Matrix network, enabling direct engagement with the Dasharo Team
and fellow subscribers for personalized, priority assistance.

Following Release Notes describe status of Dasharo (coreboot+SeaBIOS) variant
The
Following Release Notes describe the status of Dasharo (coreboot+SeaBIOS) variant
of open-source firmware development for PC Engines apu2/3/4/6 platform.

For details about our release process please read
For details about our release process, please read
[Dasharo Standard Release Process](../../dev-proc/standard-release-process.md).

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### Known issues

- [apuled driver doesn't work in FreeBSD. Check the GPIOs document for workaround.](https://github.com/pcengines/coreboot/issues/329)
- [apuled driver doesn't work in FreeBSD. Check the GPIOs document for a workaround.](https://github.com/pcengines/coreboot/issues/329)
- [Some PCIe cards are not detected on certain OSes and/or in certain mPCIe slots. Check the mPCIe modules document for solution/workaround.](https://github.com/pcengines/apu2-documentation/issues/115)
- [Booting with 2 USB 3.x sticks plugged in apu4 sometimes results in detecting only 1 stick](https://github.com/pcengines/seabios/issues/30)
- [Certain USB 3.x sticks happen to not appear in boot menu](https://github.com/pcengines/seabios/issues/29)
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This is a Dasharo Pro Package Release. To obtain access to the pre-built
binaries you will have to
[become the Dasharo Pro Package subscriber](../../ways-you-can-help-us.md#become-a-dasharo-pro-package-subscriber).
You will get the access to all of the firmware updates for the duration of the
subscription via Dasharo Pro Package newsletter.
You will get access to all of the firmware updates for the duration of the
subscription via the Dasharo Pro Package newsletter.

To verify binary integrity with hash and signature please follow the
To verify binary integrity with a hash and signature, please follow the
instructions in [Dasharo release signature verification](/guides/signature-verification)
using [this key](https://raw.githubusercontent.com/3mdeb/3mdeb-secpack/master/dasharo/pcengines_apu2/dasharo-release-24.08.00.x-for-pc-engines-signing-key.asc)

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[sha256][pcengines_apu6_seabios_v24.05.00.01.rom_hash]{.md-button}
[sha256.sig][pcengines_apu6_seabios_v24.05.00.01.rom_sig]{.md-button}

To verify binary integrity with hash and signature please follow the
To verify binary integrity with a hash and signature, please follow the
instructions in [Dasharo release signature verification](../../guides/signature-verification.md)
using [this key](https://raw.githubusercontent.com/3mdeb/3mdeb-secpack/master/dasharo/pcengines_apu2/dasharo-release-24.05.00.x-for-pc-engines-signing-key.asc)

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