feat(validation): detect missing GKE GPU NIC networks at deployment phase - #2248
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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughAdds shared discovery for eight GKE GPU NIC networks. Adds a conditional deployment validator for recipes that declare Estimated code review effort: 3 (Moderate) | ~25 minutes Merge Risk: 🟡 Moderate · up to The deployment gate improves failure detection for missing GPU NIC networks, but the provisioning guide can currently lead operators to use the wrong node-pool network arguments and block cluster creation. The shared discovery path also retains a cancellation-handling issue, so these bounded merge-readiness concerns should be corrected or explicitly accepted before merging. Suggested reviewers: 🚥 Pre-merge checks | ✅ 3 | ❌ 1❌ Failed checks (1 warning)
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In `@docs/integrator/gke-tcpxo-networking.md`:
- Around line 24-27: Update the cluster and GPU node-pool instructions: create
the cluster with --enable-dataplane-v2, --enable-ip-alias, and
--enable-multi-networking, remove --additional-ip-ranges from cluster creation,
and attach each of the eight GPU NIC VPC/subnet pairs during GPU node-pool
creation using repeated --additional-node-network entries.
- Around line 19-23: Update the “Provisioning multi-NIC networking” introduction
to state that --enable-multi-networking is required at cluster creation, while
GPU node-pool creation and the Network/GKENetworkParamSet resources follow.
Clarify that Steps 3 and 4 must finish before TCPXO workloads or AICR
validation, and that AICR only installs DaemonSets and detects the CRs rather
than provisioning the networking.
In `@validators/deployment/gke_gpu_nic_networks_test.go`:
- Around line 143-164: Extend the table-driven coverage around
checkGKEGPUNICNetworks to include list reactors returning a timeout and a
generic transport error, alongside the existing forbidden reactor. Run each case
for both declared states and assert it returns an error that is not
validators.IsSkip; retain the existing unauthorized-code assertion only for the
forbidden case.
In `@validators/deployment/gke_gpu_nic_networks.go`:
- Around line 71-75: Replace the fmt.Printf calls in the GPU NIC network
evidence output with structured slog.Info logging, including fields for the
discovered count, required count, and each network name. Remove all fmt.Printf
usage from this validator output while preserving the existing evidence details.
In `@validators/internal/gkenet/gkenet_test.go`:
- Around line 112-125: Add a test case to the existing tests for
DiscoverGPUNICNetworks using matching Network objects whose names are inserted
out of lexical order, and set the expected result to lexical order. Keep the
existing sorted-result assertions so the test fails if DiscoverGPUNICNetworks no
longer sorts its output.
In `@validators/internal/gkenet/gkenet.go`:
- Around line 74-78: Update the network-processing loop in the validator around
the gpuNIC collection to check listCtx.Done() on each iteration and return
listCtx.Err() when cancellation is observed, while preserving the existing name
filtering and gpuNICs append behavior.
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Recipe evidence checkProtected recipesRecipes with committed evidence (
Other affected recipes without evidence yet: 2These recipes are affected by this PR but carry no committed evidence pointer, so there is
How to refresh evidenceRun on a cluster matching the recipe's aicr snapshot -o snapshot.yaml
# Profiled families (AKS/GKE gpuStack): hydrate the recipe with the
# pointer's recorded 'profile:' selection first — validating the raw
# overlay resolves only the declaration default, and 'aicr validate'
# has no --profile flag. AKS additionally needs the pool projection
# (GKE uses the plain snapshot above):
# az aks nodepool list -g <rg> --cluster-name <cluster> -o json > pools.json
# aicr snapshot --aks-gpu-pools pools.json -o snapshot.yaml
# aicr recipe -s snapshot.yaml --intent <intent> [--platform <platform>] \
# --profile <name>=<value> -o recipe.yaml
# State the target leaf's intent/platform explicitly (the snapshot
# fingerprint supplies service/accelerator/OS but intent and platform
# default to 'any') and pass -r recipe.yaml below instead of the raw
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--push ghcr.io/<your-fork>/aicr-evidence
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119-141: 📐 Maintainability & Code Quality | 🟡 Minor | ⚡ Quick winConvert the applicability cases to a table-driven test.
TestCheckGKEGPUNICNetworksApplicabilitycontains three independent scenarios. Put the declaration state, network objects, and expected skip or failure result in a table.As per coding guidelines, “Write table-driven tests for multiple test cases.”
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In `@docs/integrator/gke-tcpxo-networking.md`:
- Around line 29-31: Add the --enable-gvnic flag to the GPU node-pool creation
command for the a3-megagpu-8g machine type, while retaining exactly the eight
existing --additional-node-network entries and not adding another network.
- Around line 25-26: Update the GKE networking documentation near the dedicated
VPC and subnet setup to specify one internal-traffic firewall rule per dedicated
VPC, allowing TCP, UDP, and ICMP from the required source range. For the GKE
1.35 target, state the minimum supported patch level as 1.35.2-gke.1485000 where
applicable.
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In `@validators/deployment/gke_gpu_nic_networks_test.go`:
- Around line 119-141: Convert TestCheckGKEGPUNICNetworksApplicability into a
table-driven test containing the three existing scenarios, with fields for
declaration state, network objects, and expected skip or failure outcome.
Iterate over the cases with subtests, preserving the current assertions and
behavior for undeclared, partially networked, and declared zero-network recipes.
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In `@docs/integrator/gke-tcpxo-networking.md`:
- Around line 35-45: Use one consistent Network naming scheme throughout the
document: update the workload mapping to reference the hyphenated gpu-nic-0
through gpu-nic-7 names established by the provisioning example, while
preserving any supported cluster-prefix handling.
In `@validators/deployment/gke_gpu_nic_networks_test.go`:
- Around line 217-243: Refactor the two absent Network API subtests around
checkGKEGPUNICNetworks into a single table-driven test with cases for undeclared
and declared states. Store each case’s declaration input and expected skip or
failure outcome in the table, then run the shared assertions per case while
preserving the declared-case checks for ErrCodeNotFound and the prerequisite
message.
In `@validators/deployment/gke_gpu_nic_networks.go`:
- Around line 111-113: Update the error message in DiscoverGPUNICNetworks so the
gpu-nic naming requirement applies only to each Network name, while separately
stating the GKENetworkParamSet binding requirement without implying its name
must contain gpu-nic.
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85-86: 🗄️ Data Integrity & Integration | 🟠 Major | ⚡ Quick winSeparate
Networknames from node-pool network arguments.
gpu-nic-0throughgpu-nic-7identify KubernetesNetworkobjects. The--additional-node-networkentries must use the VPC/subnet pairs from Step 3. This wording can make operators passNetworkobject names where GKE expectsnetwork=NETWORK,subnetwork=SUBNET, which can block node-pool creation. State the count and argument shape here instead.Proposed wording
-**Important:** The GPU node pool must be provisioned with only the 8 GPU NIC -networks (`gpu-nic-0` through `gpu-nic-7`). +**Important:** The GPU node pool must be provisioned with exactly 8 GPU NIC +`--additional-node-network` entries, using the VPC/subnet pairs from Step 3.Based on learnings: the
gpu-nicrequirement applies only toNetwork.metadata.name; the node-pool entries use VPC/subnet pairs.🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
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In `@docs/integrator/gke-tcpxo-networking.md`:
- Around line 85-86: The GPU node-pool networking guidance should distinguish
Kubernetes Network object names from node-pool arguments: clarify that gpu-nic-0
through gpu-nic-7 are eight Network objects, while each
--additional-node-network entry must use a VPC/subnet pair in
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…hase The gke-nccl-tcpxo health check asserts only that its two DaemonSets rolled out. Both roll out cleanly on a cluster with zero Network / GKENetworkParamSet objects, so the component reported Synced+Healthy while GPUDirect TCPXO could not function. The gap surfaced hours later as a performance-phase abort in the NCCL benchmark's own discovery, with no bandwidth number produced. Add a gke-gpu-nic-networks deployment check that counts the cluster's GPU NIC networks and fails closed below the required 8, naming the missing prerequisite. Gated by the recipe-declares contract so it skips on recipes that do not declare gke-nccl-tcpxo, and blocks rather than skips on RBAC or transport errors. The count could not be expressed as a chainsaw assert: the executor's list-assert returns on the first matching item and passes no items root to JMESPath, and GKE provisions these networks with cluster-specific prefixes so they cannot be matched by name. Discovery moves to validators/internal/gkenet, shared with the performance validator so both gate on one constant. Refs NVIDIA#2216 Signed-off-by: Yuan Chen <yuanchen97@gmail.com>
Review round. The provisioning steps named --additional-ip-ranges as the flag carrying the eight GPU NIC subnets at cluster creation. That is wrong: GKE attaches them at NODE POOL creation via repeated --additional-node-network network=,subnetwork= entries, and cluster creation takes --enable-multi-networking alongside its two prerequisites --enable-dataplane-v2 and --enable-ip-alias. Verified against Google's GPUDirect-TCPX provisioning guide. Also narrow the order-dependency claim. Only cluster creation is irreversible; a node pool can be added and the CRs applied on an existing multi-networking cluster, so "cannot be applied piecemeal" overstated it. Add timeout and transport reactor cases asserting the check blocks with ErrCodeTimeout / ErrCodeUnavailable on both declaration states, matching the RBAC case that was already covered. Document why the result sort is not asserted: the fake dynamic client returns List items already in name order, so a case inserting names out of order still passes with sort.Strings removed. Verified by disabling the sort and watching such a case pass. Covering it needs a fake that preserves insertion order. Refs NVIDIA#2216 Signed-off-by: Yuan Chen <yuanchen97@gmail.com>
The inline code span wrapped across a line break, so the MDX gate read <vpc> as a bare tag. Put the placeholder form on one line and use bare uppercase names instead of angle brackets. Refs NVIDIA#2216 Signed-off-by: Yuan Chen <yuanchen97@gmail.com>
Review round. The node-pool step omitted --enable-gvnic, which Google's GPUDirect-TCPX guide includes in the a3-megagpu-8g command alongside the eight --additional-node-network entries. Verified against that guide. The flag is easy to confuse with the existing warning against adding a gVNIC ADDITIONAL NETWORK, which displaces a GPU NIC PCI slot, so say plainly that the flag is required and the ninth network is not. Link Google's guide for the full procedure rather than restating firewall rules and version floors here, which would duplicate an upstream runbook and drift. Refs NVIDIA#2216 Signed-off-by: Yuan Chen <yuanchen97@gmail.com>
…contract Review round. Two reachable false failures. An absent Network API was classified as a blocking internal error. The CRD arrives with --enable-multi-networking, so a cluster created without it legitimately does not serve networks.networking.gke.io, and the dynamic List returns NotFound. RequireList treats every list error as infrastructure, so an undeclared recipe or standalone run false-failed instead of skipping, and a declared recipe got "failed to read GKE Networks" instead of the actionable prerequisite message this check exists to produce. Route the NotFound shape through Capability.Require, which is declaration gated: undeclared skips, declared gets the prerequisite. Every other list error still blocks via RequireList, so RBAC, timeout, and transport failures are unchanged. Discovery matches gpu-nic in metadata.name, but Google's sample manifests name the Device networks vpc1..vpc8 — applied verbatim they are invisible to AICR and the check reports 0 of 8 on a correctly provisioned cluster. That link was added to this page last round, so state the naming requirement where the procedure is described, and name it in the failure message. Refs NVIDIA#2216 Signed-off-by: Yuan Chen <yuanchen97@gmail.com>
Review round. The failure message and the provisioning step both said the Network AND GKENetworkParamSet objects must each contain gpu-nic. Discovery matches only the Network object's metadata.name; the GKENetworkParamSet is reached through the Network's spec.parametersRef and its name is unconstrained, so the text would have sent an operator on a rename that changes nothing. Also reconcile the two naming forms on the page. The provisioning steps use gpu-nic-0..7 while the workload annotation example uses gpu-nic0..7 — both match discovery, but they are different Network names, so a reader following both would reference networks their cluster does not have. Say plainly that the annotation must use the names the cluster actually has. Refs NVIDIA#2216 Signed-off-by: Yuan Chen <yuanchen97@gmail.com>
Review round. Documentation only, no behavior change. Two comments no longer described the code. The naming comment said GKE provisions cluster-specific prefixes; names are chosen by whoever provisions the cluster, and Google's own manifests use vpc1..vpc8, so containing gpu-nic is a provisioning requirement rather than an observation about GKE. More consequentially, the helper's doc claimed a cluster without multi-networking yields an empty slice and a nil error. It returns NotFound, and the deployment check's declaration-gated branch depends on that shape — a reader trusting the old text could have removed the branch as dead code. The contract now states which error shapes the caller keys on and warns against wrapping them. The verification section carried the same prefix overstatement. Refs NVIDIA#2216 Signed-off-by: Yuan Chen <yuanchen97@gmail.com>
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Review — multi-persona + adversarial meta-review
Method: four independent persona lenses (Correctness/Go, Domain & Architecture, Test-coverage, Docs), then a senior meta-reviewer that re-derived each finding from the resolved code — reproducing the top one by writing a throwaway test.
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✅ Approve with comments
A tight, fail-closed check with an honest, well-commented applicability contract. The routing logic is exhaustive with no fail-open (checked against the #2122 Capability contract), the shared-package extraction mirrors the allocmode precedent cleanly, the performance-path migration preserves behavior, and coverage is a genuine 100% on the new code. A fresh adversarial pass found no missed defect. Nothing here blocks merge — the inline notes are polish.
The earlier CodeRabbit back-and-forth holds up on independent re-derivation: the slog-vs-fmt.Printf and ctx.Done()-in-loop pushbacks are both confirmed correct (fmt.Printf is the sanctioned CTRF stdout-evidence pattern per docs/contributor/validator.md:232 and every sibling deployment check; the ~8-item in-memory filter needs no cancellation check since the List is already timeout-bounded).
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RequiredGPUNICNetworks = 8is SKU-blind (validators/internal/gkenet/gkenet.go:42) on a recipe that matches all GKE/H100 shapes. Confirmed out of scope and honestly framed: no new false-PASS (8 is the max TCPXO shape) and no new victim (the performance floor already<8-guards the same shapes). Named, commented, tracked by #1256 — worth routing through SKU-awareness when #1256 lands so the deployment and performance gates stay coupled.- Optional test edges (
validators/internal/gkenet/gkenet_test.go): exactgpu-nicsubstring boundary, a present-but-disabled component ref skip, and a context-cancelledList. Low value.
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Applicability routing (no fail-open), the raw-error contract (required for IsForbidden classification, test-guarded), the intentional dual gpu-nic-0/gpu-nic0 doc naming (the unhyphenated form mirrors the committed workload manifest), and the catalog / overlay / main.go / README wiring — all verified sound.
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🟡 Minor — In-code comment wrongly claims the load-bearing sort is uncoverable
This note says covering the load-bearing sort.Strings in DiscoverGPUNICNetworks (gkenet.go:92) "needs a fake that preserves insertion order." That isn't so: a client.PrependReactor("list","networks", ...) returning a hand-built reverse-ordered *unstructured.UnstructuredList bypasses the ObjectTracker's filterByNamespace sort and is returned verbatim. Verified by reproduction — the case passes with sort.Strings present and fails once it's deleted, while the existing table stays green.
Blast radius: The sort is load-bearing (positional eth1..eth8 map in the performance validator) yet no test can fail on its removal, so a refactor dropping it ships silently. Low impact within this PR (the deployment check only reads len()), but the shared package advertises the ordering contract unguarded.
Fix: Add one PrependReactor case feeding e.g. gpu-nic-2, gpu-nic-0, gpu-nic-1 and asserting ascending output, and correct the comment.
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You are right and my comment was wrong — fixed in 880774feb.
I reproduced both directions before changing anything. A reactor returning a hand-built *unstructured.UnstructuredList is served verbatim; seeding objects into the ObjectTracker (what my earlier attempt did) returns them ordered by name, which is why that attempt could not tell sorted from unsorted and led me to the wrong conclusion.
Control, with sort.Strings deleted:
got [gpu-nic-2 gpu-nic-0 gpu-nic-1], want [gpu-nic-0 gpu-nic-1 gpu-nic-2] (result must be sorted)
and passing with it restored. TestDiscoverGPUNICNetworksSortsResult now covers it on the reactor path, and the note explains why the table cases cannot — so the next person does not repeat my mistake.
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🟡 Minor — Absent-API failure message composes ungrammatically
absentPrerequisiteMsg's template (line 111) is "recipe declares %s but %s GPU NIC networks — ...". The count detail ("the cluster has 0 of 8") reads correctly, but this absent-API detail ends in "...without --enable-multi-networking", composing to "...created without --enable-multi-networking GPU NIC networks —", which misparses.
Blast radius: Operator-facing failure output on the absent-API path; always triggered there. No logic impact.
Fix: Reword the absent detail to end in a noun-phrase head (e.g. "...therefore has 0") and fold the --enable-multi-networking note into the trailing remediation sentence, where it already appears.
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Confirmed and fixed in 880774feb. The composed string was:
... but the cluster does not serve networks.networking.gke.io at all, so it was
created without --enable-multi-networking GPU NIC networks — ...
The detail now ends in a noun-phrase head (... so it has 0), giving ... but the cluster does not serve the networks.networking.gke.io API at all, so it has 0 GPU NIC networks — ....
I kept the flag name rather than dropping it, moving it into the remediation sentence as multi-networking (--enable-multi-networking) cannot be enabled after cluster creation. A test asserts the message still names the flag, which is what caught the omission when I first tried the reword.
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🔵 Nitpick — Message lists a GKENetworkParamSet binding the check never verifies
Discovery only name-matches Network objects (strings.Contains(name, "gpu-nic")); it never inspects spec.parametersRef, the GKENetworkParamSet, or readiness. The message lists "each bound to a GKENetworkParamSet" — read as remediation guidance, not a claim the binding was verified, and the performance phase (sharing gkenet) catches an unbound/unready binding downstream, so the deployment gate's contract isn't violated.
Blast radius: None to the gate's contract; only a potential false sense of coverage for a reader of the message.
Fix: Optional: a half-sentence noting the check counts Network names and does not verify the binding/readiness.
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Taken — the parenthetical now reads (this check counts Network names; it does not verify the GKENetworkParamSet binding or readiness).
Worth stating plainly since readiness filtering is already recorded as follow-up work on this PR: the message should not imply coverage the gate does not have.
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🔵 Nitpick — Dead present=false arg to Require on the NotFound path
Require consults present only when probeErr == nil; this call always carries a non-nil NotFound, so false is dead (correct and harmless).
Blast radius: None — readability only.
Fix: Optional: a short // present unused: probeErr != nil note.
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Added: // present is unused here: Require consults it only when probeErr is nil.
The literal false reads like a meaningful verdict otherwise.
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🔵 Nitpick — Two absence paths use two idioms
The absent-API path routes through capability.Require; the short-count path hand-rolls RecipeDeclares + absentPrerequisiteMsg. The hand-roll is justified — the static AbsentMsg string can't carry the dynamic "N of 8" count.
Blast radius: None — readability only; verified by tests.
Fix: Leave as-is, or route the short-count case through the capability so both absence verdicts share one idiom.
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Leaving as-is, per your own read of it.
Routing the short-count case through the capability would need AbsentMsg to carry the N of 8 count, which is a static field — so it would mean either a second Capability value built per call or dropping the count from the message. The count is the most useful part of that output.
The two paths do share the message body through absentPrerequisiteMsg, so the part that could drift is already single-sourced.
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🔵 Nitpick — Google docs link host differs from the repo's canonical form
Uses docs.cloud.google.com; every other Google Cloud link in the repo uses cloud.google.com, including the identical slug in recipes/components/gke-nccl-tcpxo/manifests/nri-device-injector.yaml. Both return 200 (cloud.google.com 301-redirects to the docs host), so lychee won't fail.
Blast radius: Cosmetic consistency only.
Fix: Switch to https://cloud.google.com/kubernetes-engine/docs/how-to/gpu-bandwidth-gpudirect-tcpx to match the rest of the repo.
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Switched to cloud.google.com in 880774feb — matches recipes/components/gke-nccl-tcpxo/manifests/nri-device-injector.yaml and the rest of the repo.
The docs. host came from my having fetched the page that way while verifying the flags.
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🔵 Nitpick — "nine NICs" vs "ninth --additional-node-network" reuse nine in two senses
"all nine NICs" here = eth0 primary + 8 GPU NICs; the later gVNIC callout warns against "a ninth --additional-node-network entry" = a 9th additional network (a 10th NIC). Both accurate but ~25 lines apart.
Blast radius: Momentary reader confusion; no wrong action.
Fix: Spell it out: "all nine NICs (the node's primary interface plus the eight GPU NICs)".
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Fixed — now all nine NICs (the node's primary interface plus the eight GPU NICs).
The collision is worth removing precisely because the gVNIC callout nearby is about not adding a ninth entry; a reader skimming both could conclude the two contradict each other.
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🔵 Nitpick — Grammar: plural subject, singular verb
"Steps 1–3 without step 4 is the failure mode worth knowing" — plural subject with "is".
Blast radius: None — readability.
Fix: "Completing steps 1–3 without step 4 is the failure mode worth knowing".
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Fixed — Completing steps 1–3 without step 4 is the failure mode worth knowing.
Review round. The comment claiming the load-bearing sort was uncoverable was wrong. Objects seeded into the fake's ObjectTracker come back ordered by name, which is what defeated the earlier attempt, but a reactor returning a hand-built list bypasses the tracker and is served verbatim. Add TestDiscoverGPUNICNetworksSortsResult on that path and correct the note. Verified both ways: it fails with sort.Strings removed and passes restored. The absent-API detail ended in a flag name, so it composed as "created without --enable-multi-networking GPU NIC networks", which misparses. Reword it to end in a noun phrase and name the flag in the remediation sentence instead, where it reads as guidance. Also note that the check counts Network names and verifies neither the GKENetworkParamSet binding nor readiness, so the message cannot be read as claiming coverage it does not have; mark the unused present argument on the NotFound path; use the repo's canonical cloud.google.com host; and fix the plural subject and the two senses of "nine" in the failure-mode paragraph. Refs NVIDIA#2216 Signed-off-by: Yuan Chen <yuanchen97@gmail.com>
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Addressed the review round in The substantive one: the in-code note claiming the load-bearing Also fixed the absent-API message, which composed as "created without One left as-is with reasoning on the thread: routing the short-count path through the capability would cost the "N of 8" count, since
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Summary
Adds a
gke-gpu-nic-networksdeployment-phase check that fails closed when a GKE cluster is missing theNetwork/GKENetworkParamSetobjects GPUDirect TCPXO depends on, and expands the TCPXO networking doc with the provisioning steps and a verification command.Motivation / Context
recipes/checks/gke-nccl-tcpxo/health-check.yamlasserts only that thenccl-tcpxo-installeranddevice-injectorDaemonSets rolled out. Both roll out cleanly on a cluster with zero GPU NIC networks, so the component reported Synced+Healthy while TCPXO could not function at all.The gap surfaced hours later as a performance-phase abort in the NCCL benchmark's own discovery —
expected 8 GPU NIC networks, found 0— with no bandwidth number produced and thenccl-all-reduce-bwconstraint never evaluated.Creating the CRs stays with cluster provisioning, consistent with what the doc already states. This PR only detects and documents the prerequisite.
Fixes: #2216
Related: N/A
Type of Change
Component(s) Affected
pkg/recipe)pkg/validator)docs/,examples/)Implementation Notes
The check could not be written as a chainsaw assert, as the issue originally proposed. Two independent blockers:
nilon the first live item that matches (pkg/chainsaw/inprocess.go:630-632) — there is no all-items or cardinality mode. JMESPath cannot reach the collection either, sincechecks.Checkis called per-object withbindings = nil(inprocess.go:585,625), solength(items[?...])has nothing to bind to.kind: NetworkListdoes not resolve — the RESTMapper mapsNetwork→networks.aicr-demo2-gpu-nic-0), so they cannot be matched by name either. Discovery is agpu-nicsubstring match.So the count lives in Go, in a new deployment-phase check. Acceptance criterion #3 on the issue needs amending — the count is a substring filter in Go rather than a JMESPath projection. The other three criteria are met as written.
Applicability. The check uses the existing
validators.Capability/RecipeDeclarescontract (#2122), with the absent-API case handled by shape:networks.networking.gke.io(created without--enable-multi-networking, so the CRD was never installed). The dynamic List returns NotFound, which is clean absence, not an infrastructure failure — routed throughCapability.Require, so an undeclared recipe skips and a declared one gets the actionable prerequisite message.RequireListand blocks regardless of declaration state. An error is never evidence that TCPXO is inapplicable.gke-nccl-tcpxo— skip. This keeps the check inert on EKS/AKS, on the A100/B200 GKE recipes, and on standalone runs with no recipe context. An undeclared recipe is never failed by whatever networking its cluster happens to have.Naming contract. Discovery matches the
gpu-nicsubstring against theNetworkobject'smetadata.name(the pairedGKENetworkParamSetis reached viaspec.parametersRefand its name is unconstrained). Names are chosen at provisioning time, not assigned by GKE — Google's own sample manifests name the Device networksvpc1–vpc8, which are invisible to AICR. That makes the substring a documented provisioning requirement, now stated in the docs and named in the failure message so an operator who hits 0/8 can see why.Shared discovery.
discoverGKEGPUNICNetworkswas unexported inpackage mainundervalidators/performance/. It moves tovalidators/internal/gkenet(following thevalidators/internal/allocmodeprecedent) and the8becomes a named constant both gates consume, so the deployment check and the benchmark's own discovery cannot drift. The helper returns the raw API error rather than wrapping it, soapierrors.IsForbiddenstill classifies an RBAC denial as Unauthorized instead of a blanket internal error; a test guards that contract.Blast radius is one overlay —
h100-gke-cos-trainingis the only recipe declaringgke-nccl-tcpxo, andh100-gke-cos-training-slurminherits from it.Out of scope (follow-ups, not fixed here)
RequiredGPUNICNetworksis fixed at 8 rather than derived from the node's GPU count, so a non-a3-megagpu-8gGKE shape would be measured against the H100 assumption. Same class of problem as nccl-all-reduce-bw training gate is a fixed absolute fabric-specific busbw value applied to SKU-agnostic recipes → false-fails EKS/H100 small SKUs #1256. Pre-existing — this PR names the constant but does not change the value or its derivation.Testing
Green through
test-coverage,lint,tuning-check,coverage-check, ande2e(24/24 chainsaw tests, includingcli-recipe-overlays, which exercises the catalog and overlay edits). Coverage 83.1% against the 80% floor.scanreports pre-existing vulnerabilities in vendored dependencies (grpcGHSA-hrxh-6v49-42gfand others). This PR changes no dependencies —go.mod,go.sum,vendor/, and.openvex.jsonare byte-identical toorigin/main— so the finding set is the same as main's and is not introduced here.Unit tests cover the count boundary (0 / 7 / exactly 8 / 9), cluster-prefixed and unhyphenated name forms, non-GPU networks excluded from the count, and the applicability matrix: undeclared → skip; undeclared with partial networks → skip; declared with zero → fail, not skip; RBAC, timeout, and transport errors → block with
ErrCodeUnauthorized/ErrCodeTimeout/ErrCodeUnavailableon both declaration states; missing dynamic client → fail.Coverage on the new code:
validators/internal/gkenetcheckGKEGPUNICNetworksOne deliberate gap, commented in the test file: the result sort is not asserted. The fake dynamic client returns List items already in name order, so a case inserting names out of order still passes with
sort.Stringsremoved — verified by disabling it. Such a test would assert nothing; covering the sort needs a fake that preserves insertion order.Not run: no live GKE cluster was exercised. The zero-network path is covered by a fake dynamic client, not by an actual cluster missing its CRs.
Risk Assessment
Rollout notes: Adds a new gate to one recipe's deployment phase. A GKE H100 cluster that is correctly provisioned is unaffected; one that is missing the prerequisite will now fail at the deployment phase where it previously failed later in the performance phase. That is the intended behavior change. No API or bundle-output changes.
Checklist
make testwith-race)make lint)git commit -S)