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pillar2.md

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 # Yellow Pillar
 
 ## Step 1
-Use code to get to the top of the yellow pillar. Run the code first to see how it works, and then modify it to complete the bridge.
+This program won't get you to the Yellow Pillar. When you use it, you'll see what happens to the AGENT as it tries to make a bridge with blocks. Watch how the agent places the blocks and the mistakes it makes. Then, check the program and fix those mistakes.
 
 #### ~ tutorialhint 
-It seems like the Agent is placing some of the blocks in the wrong direction.
+It looks like the agent is placing some of the blocks in the wrong direction.
 
 ```ghost
 hoc2023Objectives.pillar_AgentMove()
@@ -36,5 +36,5 @@ hoc2023Objectives.pillar_AgentPlacePinkWoolBlock(UpDown.Down)
 ```
 
 ```package
-hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts#v0.0.54
+hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts
 ```

pillar3.md

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 # Green Pillar
 
 ## Step 1
-Use code to get to the top of the green pillar Run the code first to see how it works, and then modify it to complete the bridge.
+Use this code to make a bridge and get to the top of the green pillar. First, run the instructions to see what happens, and then make changes to finish building the bridge. This code has some special parts called "repeat" blocks, which means it does the same thing a number of times.
 
 #### ~ tutorialhint 
-It seems like the Agent is placing some of the blocks in the wrong direction.
+It looks like the agent is placing some of the blocks in the wrong direction.
 
 ```ghost
 hoc2023Objectives.pillar_AgentMove()
@@ -31,5 +31,5 @@ for (let i = 0; i < 3; i++ ) {
 ```
 
 ```package
-hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts#v0.0.54
+hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts
 ```

scene1.md

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 # Food Dispenser
 
 ## Step 1
-The automatic food dispensor is missing students it can't detect. Read through the code and update it so it's able to find students of all different heights.
+The food dispenser that works by itself is not finding some students because it can't see them properly. Look at the code and make it better so it can find students of different heights. Pay attention to how the AI looks for and recognizes students.
 
 #### ~ tutorialhint 
-Set the ``||hoc2023Objectives:scan <type>||`` block to a `smart` scan.
+Try a different setting for the ``||hoc2023Objectives:scan <type>||`` block.
 
 
 ```ghost
@@ -29,5 +29,5 @@ Set the ``||hoc2023Objectives:scan <type>||`` block to a `smart` scan.
 ```
 
 ```package
-hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts#v0.0.54
+hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts
 ```

scene2.md

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 # Lawnmower
 
 ## Step 1
-Oh no! The Smart Lawnmower isn't too smart! It's running over sprinkler heads breaking them! Read through the code and update it so the lawnmower will first check for sprinkler heads before continuing.
+Oops! The Smart Lawnmower isn't too smart right now. It's running over sprinkler heads and causing damage. Let's make it smarter by changing some parts of the code. We'll replace certain blocks with new ones so that the lawnmower first checks for sprinkler heads before it starts cutting the grass.
 
 #### ~ tutorialhint 
-Make sure the lawnmower is checking to see if there's a sprinkler before cutting the grass.
+Remove the cut grass block with one of the other blocks in the tool box.
 
 ```ghost
     hoc2023Objectives.scene2_GrassCut()
@@ -31,5 +31,5 @@ Make sure the lawnmower is checking to see if there's a sprinkler before cutting
 ```
 
 ```package
-hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts#v0.0.54
+hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts
 ```

scene3.md

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 # Bird Trouble
 
 ## Step 1
-Now that we'd decoded the obfuscated words, we could see that the birds are being instructed to move the trash with nowhere to dispose of it. Let's update the code so the birds bring the trash to the dumpster.
+Now that we've uncovered the secret words, we can tell that the birds are told to pick up the trash, but there's nowhere to put it. Let's update the code by using different instructions so the birds can handle the trash in a better way, like flying it to the dumpster and dropping it there.
 
 #### ~ tutorialhint 
 Remove the ``||hoc2023Objectives: move trash||`` with the two new blocks we learned. Make sure to add them in the correct order.
@@ -45,5 +45,5 @@ while (hoc2023.scene3_SearchForGarbage()) {
 ```
 
 ```package
-hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts#v0.0.56
+hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts
 ```

scene3a.md

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 # Bird Trouble
 
 ## Step 1
-We can't quite read the code because some of it is `obfuscated` which means unclear or obscured. Before we could fix the problem we need to decode those words. Let's follow the birds to see if we could figure out what this code is doing.
+We can't quite read the code because some of it is `obfuscated` which means unclear or obscured. Before we could fix the problem we need to decode the secret words. Let's follow the birds to see if we could figure out what this code is doing.
 
 #### ~ tutorialhint 
 No coding is required here. Exit the coding window and follow the birds.
@@ -46,5 +46,5 @@ while (hoc2023Disable.scene3_ObSearchForGarbage()) {
 ```
 
 ```package
-hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts#v0.0.56
+hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts
 ```

scene3b.md

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 # Bird Trouble
 
 ## Step 1
-You decoded the obfuscated words! We could see there's two unused blocks that might help us. Exit the coding window and see if you could find a dumpster to take the trash to.
+You figured out the hidden words! Now, we noticed there are two unused blocks that might be useful. Leave the coding screen and see if you can find a dumpster to put the trash into.
 
 #### ~ tutorialhint 
 No coding is required here. Exit the coding window and find the dumpster.
@@ -45,5 +45,5 @@ while (hoc2023Disable.scene3_SearchForGarbage()) {
 ```
 
 ```package
-hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts#v0.0.56
+hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts
 ```

scene4.md

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 # Smart Doorlock
 
 ## Step 1
-Anyone can access the event logs on the doorlock causing a major privacy and security issue. We need to update the code to make sure only admins can access the event logs.
+Anyone can see the records of who has been using the doorlocks, which is a big problem for privacy and safety. We should change the code so that only administrators can look at the event logs.
 
 #### ~ tutorialhint 
-Update where the code compares the user permissions. Only admins should have access. 
+Change the part of the code where it checks what kind of user you are. Only administrators should be allowed to access it.
 
 ```ghost
 hoc2023.scene4_HumanDetected()
@@ -48,5 +48,5 @@ hoc2023.scene4_WaitMinutes(5)
 ```
 
 ```package
-hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts#v0.0.54
+hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts
 ```

scene5.md

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 # Agent Training
 
 ## Step 1
-Move the Agents to the training locations that best match the principle they represent.
+Use code to move the agents to the training spots that match the principle they represent the most.
 
 ```ghost
 hoc2023RedAgent.scene5_RedMatchAgent()
@@ -19,5 +19,5 @@ hoc2023GreenAgent.scene5_GreenMatchAgent()
 ```
 
 ```package
-hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts#v0.0.60
+hoc2023-ts=github:ReWrite-Media/hoc2023-ts
 ```