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fix(copy): clean up SpecterQA iOS sales page#53

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Summary

  • Removes internal gross margin disclosure (97% gross margin for us) from the BYOK feature — this is financial data that has no place on a customer-facing page
  • Clears tradeoffs array to [] — system requirements and BYOK mechanics belong in docs, not on a sales page
  • Rewrites all 6 feature titles and descriptions to be benefit-first and punchy
  • Rewrites overview to be confident and outcome-focused throughout

Changes by section

Section Change
features[BYOK] Removed margin disclosure; reframed as privacy + control win
features (all) Tightened to one punchy benefit sentence each
overview Removed hedging language; every paragraph now sells an outcome
tradeoffs Cleared to [] — limitations go in docs

Test plan

  • Verify page renders without the tradeoffs section (or renders cleanly with an empty array)
  • Confirm no "97%" or "gross margin" text appears anywhere on the rendered page
  • Spot-check feature card copy renders correctly

MarketingAtlas + ProductAtlas reviewed.

Removes '97% gross margin' disclosure from BYOK feature description,
clears tradeoffs array (limitations belong in docs, not the sales page),
and rewrites feature titles/descriptions and overview for benefit-first,
conversion-oriented copy.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 4.6 <[email protected]>
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Thank you for your contribution, @SyncTekLLC! We appreciate you taking the time to open this (small change) PR.

Our team will review it shortly. In the meantime, please make sure:

  • All CI checks are passing
  • The description clearly explains the motivation and approach
  • Any related issues are linked

We aim to provide a first review within 48 hours. Thank you again for contributing!

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