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@cholpoun cholpoun commented Sep 8, 2024

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Good job on getting this project together! You've done a great job with your code, covering all the necessary steps for interaction, conditional statements, and user input.

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  • You’ve used if-else statements correctly to handle various user inputs. However, there’s a slight issue with comparing guestAge. In JavaScript, you should be comparing numbers, not strings. I think you meant to do this with the line const age = Number(guestAge); but then you're doing the comparison based on guestAge anyway. On this same topic, I think clearer variable names could make this clearer - e.g. instead of guestAge and age, they could be named userInputAge and ageConvertedToNumber or something "overly descriptive". Feel free to name variables as descriptive as you want.
  • Consider adding even more validation, such as toLowerCase()
  • Use template literals instead of plus sign to improve clean code and readability:
alert(`Hi ${guestName}!`)

Changes requested

  • Add quotation marks to pepperoni
  • Correct age validation

With this said, you managed really well with the project - just need these tiny corrections 😄

code/script.js Outdated
selectedFoodType = 'Margherita'
} else if (pizzaType === '2') {
alert('You have chosen Pepperoni!')
selectedFoodType = Pepperoni
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Pepperoni is not defined - should be quotation marks around it

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Hi, @JennieDalgren made the requested changes to the JS file.

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