Review of page_admin

docs/en/modules/admin/partials/page_admins.adoc

@@ -2,30 +2,30 @@
 
 == Understand the basics
 
-You can give specific permissions to users in the different spaces, so they can only have access to some of the administration actions. 
-These roles are administrators, moderators, collaborators, and valuators.
+You can give specific permissions to users in the different spaces, so they only have access to some of the administrative actions.
+These roles are: administrators, moderators, collaborators, and valuators.
 
-* *Administrators*: they can administer the space and change the space settings.
-* *Collaborators*: they can see the space and its components before it's published and view the space settings.
-They can't edit anything.
-* *Moderators*: they can see the reported contents of the space and hide or unhide it.
-* *Valuators*: they can evaluate proposals, give them answers and update their statuses. 
+* *Administrators*: Can administer the space and change the space settings.
+* *Collaborators*: Can see the space and its components before it's published and view the space settings.
+They cannnot edit anything.
+* *Moderators*: Can see the reported contents of the space and hide or unhide it.
+* *Valuators*: Can evaluate proposals, give them answers and update their statuses.
 
 == How to find it?
 
-To configure space administrators, click the "Process admins" or "Assembly admins" item in the corresponding space. 
+To configure space administrators, click the "Process admins" or "Assembly admins" item in the corresponding space.
 
 image::spaces/admins_list.png[Administrators of space]
 
 == Manage admins
 
 You can find all the administrators on the list in the administration panel, with:
 
-* *Name*: name of the administrator account. 
-* *Email*: email of the administrator account. 
-* *Last log in date*: last time the administrator was logged in. 
-* *Invitation accepted at*: date when the administrator accepted the invitation by clicking the link in the invitation email. 
-* *Role*: administrator role. 
+* *Name*: Name of the administrator account.
+* *Email*: Email of the administrator account.
+* *Last log in date*: Last time the administrator logged in.
+* *Invitation accepted at*: Date when the administrator accepted the invitation by clicking the link in the invitation email.
+* *Role*: Administrator role.
 
 == Actions
 
@@ -36,17 +36,17 @@
 
 |image:icons/action_edit.png[Edit icon]
 |Edit
-|To edit the administrator role. 
+|Edit the administrator role.
 
 |image:icons/action_delete.png[Delete icon]
 |Delete
-|To delete the space administrator rights. It doesn't delete the account of the administrator. 
+|Delete the space administrator rights. It does not delete the account of the administrator.
 
 |===
 
 == Add a space administrator
 
-Click on the *New space admin* button (depending in the kind of space you're in). 
+Click on the *New space admin* button (depending in the kind of space you're in).
 
 image:spaces/admins_form.png[New space administrator form]
 
@@ -57,47 +57,47 @@
 
 |Name
 |Required
-|What's the name of the new administrator.
+|The name of the new administrator.
 
 |Email
 |Required
-|What's the email of the new administrator, so they can receive an invitation if they don't already have an account. 
+|The email address of the new administrator. They will receive an invitation if they don't already have an account.
 
 |Role
 |Required
-|Which role does this administrator should have in the space. Can be any of Administrator, Collaborator, Moderator, or Valuator.
+|Which role does this administrator should have in the space (Administrator, Collaborator, Moderator, or Valuator).
 |===
 
 == Roles
 
 === Administrators
 
 A space administrator can administer the space and change the space settings. They can also invite new space administrators.
-When managing the space, they would only see the following views and tabs. 
+When managing the space, they only see the following views and tabs.
 
 image:spaces/admins_role_admin01.png[Process administrators view 01]
 
 image:spaces/admins_role_admin02.png[Process administrators view 02]
 
 === Collaborators
 
-A space collaborator can preview a space before it's published. 
+A space collaborator can preview a space before it's published.
 
 image:spaces/admins_role_collaborator.png[Process collaborators view]
 
 === Moderators
 
-A space moderator can review the reported contents of the space and hide or unhide them. They can also 
-access the reported content in the global moderation panel, but don't see the contents reported from other spaces. 
+A space moderator can review the reported contents of the space and hide or unhide them. They can also
+access the reported content in the global moderation panel, but don't see the content reported from other spaces.
 
 image:spaces/admins_role_moderator.png[Process moderators view]
 
 === Valuators
 
 A space valuator can review the proposals of the space that were assigned to them, by:
 
-* change the status of the proposals, by accepting or rejecting them.
-* give an answer to the proposals. 
-* add a monetary value to the proposals, so they can be voted with the budget component.
+* Changing the status of the proposals (accepting or rejecting them).
+* Answer proposals.
+* Add a monetary value to the proposals, so they can be voted with the budget component.
 
 image:spaces/admins_role_valuator.png[Process valuators view]