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Wording changes#20
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jpturcotte:language-overhaul

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Some suggestions to improve the readability, clarity, and desirability of the text.

Some suggestions to improve the readability, clarity, and desirability of the text.
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@shun-iwasawa Sorry to trouble you, but could you review this when you have some time, please?

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It seems that indentations and line breaks are also changed in your PR so I couldn't detect where to review.
Can you please let me know where in the text have you modified?

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@shun-iwasawa I am so sorry, I will try to fix this.

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