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@lymereJ Thanks for the great work and the discussion. I just added my revision based on our discussion. Please take a look and see if the changes make sense to you. Thanks!
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| Advances in building control have shown significant potential for improving building energy performance and decarbonization. Studies show that designs utilizing optimized controls that are properly tuned could cut commercial building energy consumption by approximately 29% - equivalent to 4-5 Quads, or 4-5% of the energy consumed in the United States [@impa_ctrl]. Driven by the significant control-related energy-saving potential, commercial building energy codes (such as American Society of Heating, Refrigerating and Air-Conditioning Engineers (ASHRAE) 90.1 [@90.1]) have progressed with many control-related addenda. For example, from the publication of 90.1-2004 to 90.1-2016 (four code cycles), 30% of the new requirements are related to building control (with most of them focused on Heating, Ventilation, and Air Conditioning (HVAC) system control) [@impl_ctrl]. | ||
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| However, one of the challenges to realizing those savings is the correct implementation of such advanced control strategies and regularly verifying their actual operational performance. A field study found that only 50% of systems observed have their control system correctly configured to meet the energy codes requirement, and control-related compliance verification is typically not included in the commissioning scope. Current control verification is often conducted manually, which is time-consuming, ad-hoc, incomplete, and error-prone. |
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@leijerry888 - Missing reference?
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| Advances in building control have shown significant potential for improving building energy performance and decarbonization. Studies show that designs utilizing optimized controls that are properly tuned could cut commercial building energy consumption by approximately 29% - equivalent to 4-5 Quads, or 4-5% of the energy consumed in the United States [@impa_ctrl]. Driven by the significant control-related energy-saving potential, commercial building energy codes (such as American Society of Heating, Refrigerating and Air-Conditioning Engineers (ASHRAE) 90.1 [@90.1]) have progressed with many control-related addenda. For example, from the publication of 90.1-2004 to 90.1-2016 (four code cycles), 30% of the new requirements are related to building control (with most of them focused on Heating, Ventilation, and Air Conditioning (HVAC) system control) [@impl_ctrl]. |
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We should probably use commercial building energy codes and standards instead of just commercial building energy codes.
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| title={Decarbonizing the U.S. Economy by 2050: A National Blueprint for the Buildings Sector}, | ||
| author={{U.S. Department of Energy}}, | ||
| howpublished={\url{https://www.energy.gov/eere/articles/decarbonizing-us-economy-2050}} |
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Missing a , at the end :-)
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