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Breakout Room 10 - Implementing Mad Libs Generator#11

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Looks good in general, clear logic. Comments are mostly about using f-strings and the loop conditions, and several syntax issues.

Comment thread main.py
#Mad Libs Generator Project
//Loop back to this point once code finishes
loop = 1
while (loop < 9):
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Double check the exit condition for while loop and make sure user can create 10 stories.

Comment thread main.py
// Displays the story based on the users input
print ("------------------------------------------")
print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun)
print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",")
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Double check the spelling "seond_noun" (possible typo)

Comment thread main.py
print ("Where the weather is always",adjective,".")
print ()
print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",")
print ("Well it is.")
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Consider using f string for integrating variables with strings and adding spaces between words.

Comment thread main.py
print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",")
print ("Be kind to your",plural_noun,"in",place)
print ("Where the weather is always",adjective,".")
print ()
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Consider removing this line if print() has no contents?

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Line 2, 5, 12, 22: consider using # for comments instead of “//”

Comment thread main.py
Comment on lines +6 to +11
noun = input("Choose a noun: ")
plural_noun = input("Choose a plural noun: ")
second_noun = input("Choose a noun: ")
place = input("Name a place: ")
adjective = input("Choose an adjective (Describing word): ")
third_noun = input("Choose a noun: ")
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Consider if users enter an invalid input, such as empty input, noun instead of plural noun, a noun instead of adjective.. How would the code handle situations like that?

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