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Mini-Rewrite of Main Page #2731

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Welcome to osu!, a free rhythm game created by peppy with its primary focus of clicking circles along with the beat. Aside from the main game mode, which is referred to many as *osu!standard*, osu! has three other different game modes, namely: osu!taiko, osu!catch, and osu!mania.
Welcome to to the osu! knowledge base, or otherwise known as the osu!wiki. This is a resource for new and veteran players to use for osu!.
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you really shouldn't be writing prose. read this back to yourself. you're writing words for the sake of writing words, not to actually convey anything of value (focus on the second line)

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Reading back, yeah I think this was completely butchering the entire blurb and its not even delivering the message propery. Please rewrite this.

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This wiki is based on the contributions of the community with the primary aim of replacing the old FAQ section, and allows it to become a much more exhaustive resource.
This wiki is based on the contributions of the community. You can help by reading the Contribution Guide, which is listed on the osu!wiki GitHub repository.
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# Getting Started

[Registration](/wiki/Registration) • [Installation](/wiki/Installation) • [Game Interface](/wiki/Interface) • [Game Options](/wiki/Options) • [Shortcut Key Reference](/wiki/Shortcut_Key_Reference) • [Sitemap](/wiki/Sitemap) • [Guides](/wiki/Guides) • [Help Centre](/wiki/Help_Centre)

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# Gameplay

[FAQ](/wiki/FAQ) • [Multi](/wiki/Multi) • [Game Modes](/wiki/Game_Modes): ([osu!](/wiki/Game_Modes/osu!) • [osu!taiko](/wiki/Game_Modes/osu!taiko) • [osu!catch](/wiki/Game_Modes/osu!catch) • [osu!mania](/wiki/Game_Modes/osu!mania))
[FAQ](/wiki/FAQ) • [Multiplayer](/wiki/Multi) • <br> [Game Modes](/wiki/Game_Modes): ([osu!](/wiki/Game_Modes/osu!) • [osu!taiko](/wiki/Game_Modes/osu!taiko) • [osu!catch](/wiki/Game_Modes/osu!catch) • [osu!mania](/wiki/Game_Modes/osu!mania))

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# [Beatmap Editor](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor)

Sections: ([Compose](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Compose) • [Design](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Design) • [Timing](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Timing) • [Song Setup](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Song_Setup)) • Components: ([Beat Snap Divisor](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Beat_Snap_Divisor) • [Distance Snap](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Distance_Snap)) • [Beatmapping](/wiki/Beatmapping) • [Difficulties](/wiki/Difficulties) • [Hit Objects](/wiki/Hit_Objects) • [Mapping Techniques](/wiki/Mapping_Techniques) • [Storyboarding](/wiki/Storyboarding)
Sections: ([Compose](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Compose) • [Design](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Design) • [Timing](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Timing) • [Song Setup](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Song_Setup)) • <br> Components: ([Beat Snap Divisor](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Beat_Snap_Divisor) • [Distance Snap](/wiki/Beatmap_Editor/Distance_Snap)) • [Beatmapping](/wiki/Beatmapping) • [Difficulties](/wiki/Difficulties) • [Hit Objects](/wiki/Hit_Objects) • [Mapping Techniques](/wiki/Mapping_Techniques) • [Storyboarding](/wiki/Storyboarding)

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# How You Can Help

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If you're interested in shaping the future of osu!, you can help by contributing to any of its projects that interest you.
If you're interested in helping to shape the future of osu!, you can help by contributing to any of the projects that interest you.
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[osu!wiki](https://github.com/ppy/osu-wiki) • [osu!lazer](https://github.com/ppy/osu-wiki) • [osu!web](https://github.com/ppy/osu-web)
[osu!](https://github.com/ppy/osu) • [osu!wiki](https://github.com/ppy/osu-wiki) • [osu!web](https://github.com/ppy/osu-web)

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